Obey the Bunny ([info]obeythebunny) wrote,
@ 2005-03-07 19:31:00
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Current mood: horny

HP, Snape/Lupin, R, 'Melt' (March 2005)
Title: Melt
Author: [info]obeythebunny
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Snape/Lupin
Rating: R
Summary: Dumb little PWP drabble that I've had in my bunny book forever. Didn't get written because it's a subject that's been done to death, and while it's hardly very original, it's sort've a homage to my Lindt 70% addiction and it's dedicated to the lovely [info]cruisedirector ;o)
Warning: Erm... PWP. Potentially unhygienic usage of Confectionary. Chocolate-coated Lupin, anyone?! *GUH*
Feedback: Ain't just what happens when you smash your guitar up, kids!
Disclaimer: The guys are property of JK Rowling. I just help them to get on that little bit better... :op



Chocolate is The Cure. Or at least Lupin always treats it as such and he's not averse to encouraging creative usage. It makes you feel good, certainly; certainly and unquestionably.

Snape has schooled himself in muggle chemistry, not only a compliment to potions craft but also a case of Know Your Enemy. He knows about endorphins and he knows about serotonin and he knows just why chocolate is a little bit like sex. Because it's all a case of the familiar versus the exotic - muggle lovers might talk dreamily of 'magic', but Severus knows the true meaning of 'chemistry'; even the word is more sensual, somehow, that soft, suggestive 's' more appealing than two solid, hardy syllables; ma-gic.

When you melt chocolate and drizzle it onto skin, it is hot and it burns. Lupin's tongue follows the path, the chocolate bitter and black like the man himself but oh so good, rich and sinful and snaps when you break it (like the man himself) nothing like that insipid milk stuff that the children go for. Lupin likes the crack, his teethmarks and delicate print of the lines in his lips on the polished black surface of the bitter sweet. And Snape keeps his robes on, unbuttoned just enough and his shirt too, and more... to bare his chest sufficient for a path of waxy heat to be traced. It's more obscene somehow, this way, this keeping something back. Lupin likes to be naked, because it's more exciting that way, too, this shedding of genteel pretence; he well knows the power of scars hidden beneath a smart - once smart - suit; he knows a little about 'chemistry' too.

When the molten chocolate scalds him, Snape immediately, reflexively starts to whisper a healing charm. Lupin puts fingers to his lips to silence him - the pain is part of the pleasure - long, graceful, tapered fingers, covered in chocolate and Snape parts his lips to take them in, sucking with dissolute enthusiasm until Lupin's mouth moves too low for him to reach and Snape's mouth opens wide in a gasp then, his eyelids sliding distractedly closed...

Snape knows why chocolate makes you feel good; knows about chemistry and magic and why it's a little bit like sex. It's because you don't have to enjoy it alone.


*bangs head against desk* Spring fever, anyone?! *whimper*




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[info]darkrhiannon
2005-03-07 09:25 pm UTC (link)
faaaahck! Am now consumed with thoughts of Lupin kissing Snape better as Snape drizzles the too-hot chocolate on his own flesh and offers it up as treat/crack/poison/cure to his werewolf lover.

Yum!

-Rhi

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[info]stephanometra
2005-03-08 12:53 am UTC (link)
I WILL DO ANY NUMBER OF OBSCENE THINGS TO WHOEVER DOES ART OF THIS

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:03 am UTC (link)
*seconds that*

I'd offer myself, but am soooo busy...

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:03 am UTC (link)
You can't beat a bit of hot chocolate... He heh, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :oD

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[info]_lore
2005-03-07 11:02 pm UTC (link)
Mmmmmm, very nice! Thank you for sharing! Think Spring! :D

love, lore

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:04 am UTC (link)
*thinks Spring*

*headdesk*

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it! :o)

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[info]fourth_moon
2005-03-07 11:38 pm UTC (link)
Phantastic! I especially like the way you manage to describe bitter-sweet chocolate (guess what I'm eating right now?) and show the parallels to Snape. The bits of characterisation and the descriptions of sounds and tastes are great.

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:05 am UTC (link)
"guess what I'm eating right now?"
Ack, gimme! I need to go buy some, it's becoming a serious addiction... (can you tell from this drabble?!)

Cheers Hon ;o) <3

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[info]cruisedirector
2005-03-08 12:34 am UTC (link)
*whimper*

I am craving either chocolate or Snape and I can't tell which.

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[info]cruisedirector
2005-03-08 12:36 am UTC (link)
...and I hit send before I got the "thank you" in there. Thank you! *licks you, Lupin and Snape in equal measure*

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[info]celtprincess13
2005-03-08 04:11 am UTC (link)
Love your icon--Phil Allen is possibly my absolute fave of Alan's characters.

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[info]cruisedirector
2005-03-08 04:20 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'd be hard-pressed to choose between him, Jamie from Truly, Madly, Deeply and the one in my icon who just rang so many of my bells.

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:09 am UTC (link)
*wibble* And it's too early in the morning for me to be looking at *that* icon at work... o.O!

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:06 am UTC (link)
I think I'm definitely craving chocolate + Lupin... fandom is a baaaaad influence (heh, not to mention YOU are a bad influence and pretty much the whole reason I'm currently writing again..!)

*beams* Glad you liked it, hon! <3<3

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[info]celtprincess13
2005-03-08 04:10 am UTC (link)
oooh, this is great. Makes me want a little chocolate covered Severus myself.

the chocolate bitter and black like the man himself but oh so good, rich and sinful and snaps when you break it (like the man himself) nothing like that insipid milk stuff that the children go for
I love this comparison--so apt!

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:07 am UTC (link)
Thanks very much, pet - and thank you for reading! :o)

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[info]sinick
2005-03-08 04:29 am UTC (link)
70%? Phff. 85% or bust, bebbee! ;9

BTW, that drabble? Hottt, with added 't's, as in tease.

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:08 am UTC (link)
GUH!

*sexwaz* I definitely haven't seen THAT for sale over here o.O! No fair! *waaaants it*

"Hottt, with added 't's, as in tease."
He heh... why, thank you - glad you enjoyed!

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[info]xochiquetzl
2005-03-08 05:16 am UTC (link)
Mmm. Delicious!

May we have some more? :)

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:08 am UTC (link)
:o) Thank you... I'll certainly work on it!

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[info]drusillas_rain
2005-03-08 05:24 am UTC (link)
oh, very nice!

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 09:08 am UTC (link)
Thanks, pet!

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[info]dphearson
2005-03-08 10:58 am UTC (link)
What a lovely picture you described here! And this last line makes it:

Snape knows why chocolate makes you feel good; knows about chemistry and magic and why it's a little bit like sex. It's because you don't have to enjoy it alone.

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 11:01 am UTC (link)
Aw, thank you very much, glad you enjoyed!

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[info]luckykitty
2005-03-08 04:27 pm UTC (link)
nhhhhhhhhhhggggggghhhhhhh

(might leave more coherent comment later. when brain is not melted like hot chocolate dribbling down snape's ribcage under his cloak lupin licking *WRITHESSSSSSSSSSSS*)

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-08 06:37 pm UTC (link)
*bwhahaha!*

My work here is done!

(But seriously - THANK YOU for reading, pet! <3)

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[info]chessie_reeves
2005-03-09 01:22 am UTC (link)
*grins happily* That was yummy. I love the way you describe the chocolate—very sensual.

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-09 12:54 pm UTC (link)
Why, thank you very much indeed! Glad you enjoyed :o)

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[info]therosewilde
2005-03-09 08:29 am UTC (link)
AIAIAIAIAIAI!
Yowzers.

@-'-,------

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-09 12:55 pm UTC (link)
Heh, I'll take that as a compliment! *mwah*!

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[info]dreamhunter
2005-03-09 10:35 pm UTC (link)
*GUH* O__O i think i'm developing a major chocolate-sex kink here! this almost killed me- i think i will forever be haunted by chocolate!sex bunnies now! <3
(and you really should write more HP slash. because, you know... TEH SEX! *har*)

*loves a lot* *snuggles*

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-10 09:23 am UTC (link)
"i think i'm developing a major chocolate-sex kink here!"
I think I already GOT one o.O Damn Professor Lupin!

Thanks for reading and glad you liked it, pet <3

*goes off to write more*

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[info]anneline
2005-03-31 07:19 pm UTC (link)
Yummy. This is really well written and thoughtful. Chocolate sex is done a lot but you have a really fresh approach here, I think, with the pain and the chemistry. And the crackling crack of it all.

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-03-31 07:51 pm UTC (link)
Thanks pet - I'm glad you liked it and I managed to give a little bit of an original twist! <3

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[info]morethanadream
2005-07-03 11:13 pm UTC (link)
.....oh my. I thought I was the only one who was addicted to Lindt and started to write assorted drabbles about it o_O;;;;;

Gorgeous... and makes me want chocolate too ;_;

(*smacks Remus on the back of the head* milk chocolate is not insipid :P it's crack (don't get me started on white chocolate...))

XX

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-07-04 07:52 am UTC (link)
Ewwww, white chocolate?!

Thanks for commenting though hon, glad you enjoyed :o)

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[info]alevai
2005-10-09 10:46 pm UTC (link)
Guhhhh.

long, graceful, tapered fingers, covered in chocolate and Snape parts his lips to take them in, sucking with dissolute enthusiasm until Lupin's mouth moves too low for him to reach and Snape's mouth opens wide in a gasp then, his eyelids sliding distractedly closed...
Sweet LORD can you do sensual. And I like that the fic is just this little morcil (morsel? morcel?) of pleasure. My toes are tingling. :0p

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[info]obeythebunny
2005-10-10 07:49 pm UTC (link)
*beams*

It's ALL about the Snape, y'know. Rawr!

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